x4740N@lemmy.world to Ask Lemmy@lemmy.worldEnglish · 7 months agoWhat is a bad writing trope you hate in fantasy fiction ?message-squaremessage-square27fedilinkarrow-up11arrow-down10
arrow-up11arrow-down1message-squareWhat is a bad writing trope you hate in fantasy fiction ?x4740N@lemmy.world to Ask Lemmy@lemmy.worldEnglish · 7 months agomessage-square27fedilink
minus-squarezero_spelled_with_an_ecks@programming.devlinkfedilinkarrow-up0·7 months agoMore than 17 apostrophes on the first page with every name of a person, place, or thing having one.
minus-squarez00s@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1·7 months agoAlso kennings. No, you do not sound mysterious using “younglings” instead of children.
minus-squareflubba86@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1·edit-27 months agoAh yes, H’taln’k from J’briom-4, flying his Zal’t M’lort class Winger to the Mont Bronl’n port with the day’s haul of Sea Crom’t. Oh won’t his mabs’k be pleased with this delivery.
More than 17 apostrophes on the first page with every name of a person, place, or thing having one.
Also kennings. No, you do not sound mysterious using “younglings” instead of children.
Ah yes, H’taln’k from J’briom-4, flying his Zal’t M’lort class Winger to the Mont Bronl’n port with the day’s haul of Sea Crom’t. Oh won’t his mabs’k be pleased with this delivery.