I was able to write better in english than in that diary when i was 9 and its not even my first language

If someone in my class wrote that bad when i was 9, they would get a green circle(the worst thing that you could get at that time) on an english test

Edit: i forgot a not

I disagree.

She is already willingly writing about her day; she is ahead of many when looking at our educational system.

Her writing and grammar can improve a bit, but what a wonderful start she had!